I wrote my academic mindsets argument in favor of a growth mindset. My first draft had all the necessary parts of an argumentative paper, but needed to be longer and better organized. In my second draft, I redid my thesis statement, expanded upon the two main points for my argument in favor of the growth mindset, and made my counter-argument/rebuttal into its own paragraph. I expanded upon that as well using an additional source. For my third draft, I added an example for my first main point to make it stronger and removed a part of the paper that wasn't working.
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